Porfolio 1
Photographer: Alyssa Schukar
Main focus StoryProblems
All the pictures are the same with the same lenses, same distance, same feel.
Not many strong singles like the Uncle sam picture.
Good things that the judges liked was how the girls fell off the hurdles.
Nice graphics and lighting with the people on the stairwell
Overall I liked most of her pictures.
Portfolio 2
Photographer: Nick Adams
Main Focus photoj
Problems that were bad was the focus, lighting, and framing
Good Things Man that lives in Burger barn
Headless cheerleader but dont like the focus.
Overall the pictures are kind of boring to me
Portfolio 3
Photographer: Daryl Peveto
Main Focus StoryProblems
Wrong caption to put for the photos
Dont like the kids
Same looking pictures throughout the whole portfolio
Good Things Nice lighting Nice balance of color Overall There were nice pictures, but most of them look the same.
Portfolio 4
Photographer: Justin Mott
Main focusPhotoj
ProblemsFocus Cut off head
Portfolio building
Good Things Like the first picture Faces in foreground OverallI liked it, it had some strong pictures
Winning PortfolioDustin SnipesStrengthsColor, Composition, Good involvement, creative, in the middle of actionWinner processSee if there are any bad pictures, look if there are any blanks in the middle, see if the stories are the same, look at all the strong pictures, see if there is diversity
Individual photos
Agree The girl running through the hurdle. I like it because it makes you want to know more about the picture like who won or what happen, but i really like how it shows the girls legs passing her up. It looks as if the photographer was at the finish line of the track. I Disagree about the kids about to fight with the blue and red mats. I dont think it should be off centered because havin it centered makes it balanced